楼主加分啊=。=|||||to whom it may concern:RE:xxxxxxxxxxxI am very glad to help Mr X who is the student that graduated in our university to write this recommendation letter（+感觉这里加点东西把+） Life is full of wealth, the biggest wealth may be are the efforts and progress(直译好奇怪的感觉 所以lz自己修改把) Mr X is the energetic young man who is good at finding them During three years learning in our school , the academic record has held the top in our school Mr X has strong language talent, the first year in high school he can speak English perfectly, that without a English environment Me and Mr X talked a lot in free time In a teacher's point of view, Mr X in class (。。。。), and while he and curious explore the world, get a lot of extracurricular knowledge Mr X he is a person who easy get close to, talk to him people will get relax and happy, the most impressive is he had a awesome pronunciation of English, fluent and natural, completely don't recognize this is a never had children out on China said the English In his school, come to our school to support teaching two New York university graduates also highly of him, Mr X also and two foreign teachers development the deep friendship In short, Mr X is a useful person, I believe that he will make a better future For Mr X in your university study, I have every confidence, he'll be with their own special in your university organization to take part in all kinds of activities, also can finish all our courses to graduate 楼主求给分+加分啊 翻译了我一晚上的东西 回到正题表示我英语也只有ESL-EO的水平啊 见谅~~ 太专业 也不好的啦 所以 就这样帮lz改出来了一篇建议：1 建议lz不要写过多得奖或者过多等等 适当加 （会弄得人家惭愧的）2 本人修改后的文章应该还有很多bug lz自行更改（很想知道 楼主是用谁的口吻写的 我中文不好 看不懂 =3=）冉冉升起的明日之星大学英语作文我的大学梦 My College Dream“The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstance they want, and if they cannot find them, make them” Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer This view has been shared now by more and more people I’m very glad to receive college education and i reached the conclusion that i have come to college not for one single reason, but for many“这世上的成功之士，是那些奋力寻觅自己想要得到机遇的人们。倘使找不着机会，他们就自己创造机会。”这句名言是一个伟大的作家萧伯纳写的。被原来越多的人分享着。我很高兴能够接受大学教育，我总结出我想上大学不单单是为了一个原因，而是很多个。First, university is such an ideal place to broaden my horizon and make more friends The youth of 21stcentury should be open-minded, instead of being a person with a tunnel vision I’m ready to meet more challenges and make more friends during the four years第一，大学是能开阔我眼界和结交更多朋友的理想之地。作为21世纪的年轻人，我们应该开拓思维，而不是目光狭隘。我已经做好在这四年内接受挑战和认识更多朋友的准备了。Second, I’m unwilling to step into the society straight after high school I’m afraid I’m not fully prepared for the working environment: complicated interpersonal problems, jockeying for position, a tremendous amount of pressure and etc I have to face various kinds of major conflicts as well as trivial things I seem to be over-pessimistic, but that actually accounts for part of my choice第二，我不愿意在高中之后就直接进入社会。我害怕我没有完全做好踏入工作环境的准备：复杂的人际问题，用手段谋取职位，巨大的压力等等。我必须面对各种重大冲突还有琐碎事情。我也许是过度悲观了，但是事实上这也是我做出选择的一个原因。Finally, thanks to the all-out support from my parents, i am able to further my study in university I’ll spare no efforts to live up to their expectation on me to be a well-trained and well-rounded person最后，幸好有我父母的全力支持，我才得以在大学继续我的学业。我会不留余力地满足他们的期望成为一个训练有素全面发展的人。I will learn experience and challenge myself in my college life and be an outstanding person of future 我会在大学生涯中学习，经历和挑战我自己，在未来成为一个佼佼者。大学生应该怎样规划自己的职业生涯英语作文 冉冉升起的明日之星大学英语作文 　Jeremy Lin, one of the most popular basketball players in NBA, plays for New York Knicks and leads his team to win, although he was fired by the Golden State Warriors and Houston Rockets Jeremy Lin is a Chinese-American, who was born on August 23, 1988 in California, USA He graduated from Harvard University, majoring in economics with a minor in sociology During the school, he led Harvard University basketball team won the Ivy League group champion After that, he signed with the Golden State Warriors and became the first Harvard University student to enter NBA since 1953 and the first Chinese –American player in NBA 　林书豪，虽然曾被金州勇士队和休士顿火箭队开除，但他是NBA中最受欢迎的篮球运动员之一，他效力于纽约尼克斯队并领导他的球队取得胜利，林书豪是美籍华裔，出生于1988年8月23日，美国的加利福尼亚。他毕业于哈佛大学，主修经济学，副修社会学。在校期间，他领导哈佛大学篮球队赢得了常春藤联盟组冠军。在那之后，他与金州勇士队签约,成为哈佛大学自1953年以来第一个进入NBA的学生,也是第一个在NBA的美籍华裔球员。 　Jeremy Lin is know to people since February 4 In a 99-92 victory over the New Jersey Nets, he scored 25 points, five rebounds and seven assists-all career-high Since then, he got more playing time and began his legendary performances and led the team to seven consecutive victories In the game with the Los Angeles Lakers, his scoring even more than Kobe Bryant Because of his sudden rise, February 16, Jeremy Lin was invited to participate in Rising Stars Challenge while he was originally not appeared in the entry list 　林书豪自从2月4号开始就为人所知。以99 - 92的比分击败新泽西网队,他得到25分,5个篮板和7次助攻，创他职业生涯记录。从此，他获得更多的上场时间，开始了他传奇的表演并领导他的`队伍取得了七连胜。在与洛杉矶湖人队的比赛中他的得分甚至比科比-布莱恩特的还多。因为他的突然崛起,2月16日，林书豪被邀请参加新星挑战赛，尽管他最初并没有出现在列表名单上。 　Due to his outstanding performance, the media overwhelmingly reported him into a hero of New York city The US media also gave him a resounding nickname “Lin-sanity ” At the same time, his is so popular in the Internet that the videos about him are crazy spread After all, Jeremy Lin is just a new player in NBA, and he has much to learn We hope him to work hard as before and play well in the future 　由于他杰出的表现，媒体大量的报道使他成为纽约的英雄。美国媒体还给赋予他一个响亮的昵称“林理智“。同时，他在网络上也是非常受欢迎的，以至于与他有关的视频被疯狂地传播。毕竟，林书豪在NBA中只是一个新的运动员，所以他还有很多东西是需要去学习的。希望他能够和之前一样努力学习，将来球打得越来越好。 ;作文如下。First of all, we should evaluate ourselves, mainly to evaluate our knowledge and ability, and understand our level Second, we should evaluate the social environment, what is the current employment environment and what is the popular industry for job hunting in society The third is to determine your career goals Based on a comprehensive understanding to formulate a reasonable and appropriate career goal中文：首先我们要对自我进行评估，主要是要对自己的学识能力等等也进行各方面对评估，了解自己的水平。第二要对社会环境进行评估，当前的就业环境是怎样，社会上的求职的热门行业是什么。第三是要确定自己职业目标。基综合了解来制定一个合理的合适的职业目标。